这是我写的一篇英文情书请大家帮忙给点建议

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这是我根据我和她的实际情况写的，以前没写过什么英文情书这次是第一次所以不想搞砸希望大家能够指出缺点比如说哪个用词不准确，哪个句子结构不对，哪里表达的不够清楚。指出并给出改正谢谢！！！回答的好再给50分！！！

I have no idea that from when I kind of had a crush on you.your way to speak,your way to smile,your way to deject are always caught by my eyes. I do not exactly know what kind of feelings it is,but I do realize that I want to see you,to hear your voice,to stay by your side,to share happiness and sorrows with you.I really want to try my best to let you know what I feel but my words was too plain and you know you deserve more..........
You may disappointed at what I did to you. Actually you may thought I did nothing to promote the relationship between you and me. I guess you never thought I cared about you. But,baby that was not true. I was just to proud to say it out cause I am not the kind to ever let my feelings show cause I thought being strong meant never losing my self control. Now i am conscious of i am wrong ，fall in love is so complicated that I do not know h

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I have no idea that for what I had a crush on you.Your way to speak,your way to smile,and your way to be upset always catch my eyes. I do not exactly know what kind of feeling it is,but I do realize that I want to see you,to hear you,to stay beside you,and to share happiness and sorrows with you.I tried my best to make you understand how I feel but my words was too plain and I know you deserve more..........
You may be disappointed at what I did to you. Actually you may think I did nothing to promote the relationship between you and I. I guess you never thought I'm caring about you. But baby that was not true. I was so eager to say it out I am not the kind ever to express my feelings because I thought being strong means never losing self control. Now I realize i am wrong.Falling in love is so complicated that I do not know how to handle it . But this time I know to let my feelings follow the sense from the bottom of my heart, so tell me what can I do