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The best color stands for the Olympics
Well, in this lively summer, the magnificent sunshine has brought the breath of the Beijing 2008 Olympics. In my mind, it is the symbol of the Olympics to be golden.
Athletes trained diligently and tried their best to win. Chinese athletes really did a great job, so this year China won the first prize at the gate of our homeland. We could hear the crowd cheered and see tears falling from their eyes as they went up receive the prize. They who were standing on the stage as if were emitting a golden light. The medals confirmed their effort. Those hearts working hard to strive and to struggle of theirs are golden. They were the most persevering people.
Besides the competition between countries, friendship is shown completely. The Olympics was a crossing as well as people from all over the world were passerby. There were a lot of people passing Beijing every day, including the Asians, the
In the lively summer, bright sunshine lightened up Beijing's sky, symbolizing
the golden success of this year's Beijing Summer Olympics Games. All atheletes
trained diligently for years, hoping to win gold medals at the Olympics.
This year, Chinese athletes performed exceptionally well,
winning the most gold medals for China in front of the cheering home crowd.
We could hear the crowd cheering and see tears running down the athletes' faces
when they walked up to the podium to receive medals. At that moment, they were
the shining gold stars on the stage. Years of hard work were finally paid off.
The medals were the best rewards for them. The perseverances and dedications that
these atheletes displayed are truly admirable.
The Olympics is not only about competitions but more importantly about friendship. It's a
grand family gathering of people from all over the world, different nationalities, yo