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Recently the issue of whether or not accept equal member of male and female students in every subject has been in the limelight and has aroused wide concern in the public.in this essay i aim to explore this complicate phenomenon from diverse perspectives,identify the relevant contributing factors and bring up some effective measures.on a personal note,i am approve of that the students should be separate as same amount as male and female in every subject.
As far as i am concerned,an array of integrated factors contributing to this complicate phenomenon and here i would explore only a few of the most important ones.the first important reason is those who strongly approve of that the man have more creative than woman in some subjects such as mathematics.one of disquieting facts stemming from this is that some woman will give up their right to choice the science and mathematics education.this has resulted in the extreme disparity between the male and the female students.

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