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这篇文章是有关报纸的历史的 这是其中的两段
原文
In Renaissance Europe, handwritten newsletters circulated privately among merchants, passing along information about everything from wars and economic conditions to social customs and human interest stories. In Germany the Zeitung(newspaper) was first published in 1502。
In the English-speaking world, the earliest predecessors of the newpaper were corantos, small news sheets produced only when some event worthy of notice coourred. Trewe Encountre became the earliest known English-language new sheet in 1513. Then, when the printing press was invented in the mid 1400s,newspaper was the London Gazette of 1666.
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Handwritten newsletters in Renaissance Europe circulated privately among merchants and the first newspaper in Germany was published in 1502.
The earliest predecessors of the newspaper and known English news sheet were corantos and Trewe Encountre. The first printed newpaper was the London Gazette.
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In Renaissance Europe, handwritten newsletters circulated privately among merchants, passing along information about everything from wars and economic conditions to social customs and human interest stories. In Germany the Zeitung(newspaper) was first published in 1502。
In the English-speaking world, the earliest predecessors of the newpaper were corantos, small news sheets produced only when some event worthy of notice coourred. Trewe Encountre became the earliest known English-language new sheet in 1513. Then, when the printing press was invented in the mid 1400s,newspaper was the London Gazette of 1666.
在文艺复兴时期的欧洲，手写简讯分发私人之间的商人，传递信息的一切战争和经济条件，社会风俗和人类利益的故事。在德国，德国（报纸）是首次出版，在1502年。
在英语世界里，最早的前任的newpaper被corantos ，小制作的新闻床单只有当某些事件值得注意的coourred 。 Trewe Encountre成为已知最早的英语新表在1513年。然后，当印刷机发明中期1400s ，报纸是伦敦公报1666年。
Handwritten newsletters in Renaissance Europe circulated privately among merchants and the first newspaper in Germany was published in 1502.