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Dear mary
welcometo my hometown.the weather is hot in this season,but it's warm in spring.so everybody wear shorts and skirts . if you come ,we can paly volleyball on the beach and swimming in the sea.

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Dear Mary
I glad to hear you come to me hometown to travel
now i want to tell you some advice..in my hometown ..the
weather is so hot ..everybody must wear the short clothes..
and short trousers..and many pepole go to the island..to
swim,play the volleyball.wish u come to my hometown
your's name

hellow，wellcome you come to our family。now ，it is a nice season。its not hot but very warm。you can wear shorts
and skirts。if you come ，we can play volleyball，and go to the beach and swim。

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Dear Mary
I am glad to hear that you are coming to my hometown. I want to give you some advice..in my hometown ..the
weather is so hot