我的zheduan英语写的正确吗??

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/06/16 23:48:13
In the case of social dominance, though out the history, male is always the choice of leader, in United States, there president now is George bush, there is no doubt about it that he is man, and even their next president is either going to Obama or Macan, they are also males. And Right now basically, every family wants a boy, especially in china, under the on child policy; boys are just become the symbol of a family’s continuation, so since they know how to cry, they start to attract a lot of more attentions and cares from their parents, people are often call them Little Emperor.

嗯...很多错误~~
....throughout the history...their president...that he is a male(not man)...is going to be...also male(adj, no"s")...a family’s continuation(这话很别扭)....since they know how to cry(什么意思?)...more attention(delete "and cares")...they are often called ""...小皇帝也不该那么说
嗯...重写吧.....