谁能帮我修改一下这篇演讲稿

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/06/21 01:28:47
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由于这篇文章太长,发不上来,我放在空间里,如果修改后的答案发不上来可以用站内信发给我,并在问题后留言,谢谢了~~

这篇文章可以进行删减,因为只有3分钟,本人水平有限,有很多有问题的地方,希望得到大虾们的指教,万分感谢~~

My father was born into a peasant’s family.In 1978, when a flow of talent appeared because of the reform and opening-up,he was admitted into the university and came to the city from the countryside.
In 1990, I was born and bought up in Wuhan,the capital city ,which has a population of 8 million and an area of 3000 square kilometers .
In 2002, Premier Zhu RJ gave his evaluation to Wuhan: Wuhan is the largest "village"in rural areas in China.
In geographical changes from countryside to city,my father and I went through different growth courses .
In the rural concept confusion with urban and controversy,I seek for the value of the city and what the city brings to us with the other citizens of the city .Our ways of life are based on environment,so we have a fast-paced life in this city.
You can't see McDonald's in rural areas, but in urban areas, you can see many people walking quickly with breakfast-food in their hands .Free life timetab