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来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/06/07 13:00:32
Have you ever think about moving away from home, having total independence? Have you ever think about the problems you must confront if you live alone? Have you ever think about the consequences it will have on your study? Some students think they are already well prepared to live alone, they believe leaving home is the best way to learn about real life. But I disagree with this statement. I think moving away from home will reduce concentration on school work, and also without adult supervision, we’ll do wrong things.

你有想过从家里搬出去,完全独立地生活吗?
你有想过如果你独自生活将会面临的问题吗?
你有想对这将对你的学习产生怎样的后果吗?
一些学生认为对于独立生活他们已经完全作好了准备,他们相信离开家将是他们了解真实人生的最佳途经。但是我不赞同这样的观点。我认为从家里搬出去这样将减少他们投入到学习的精力,并且离开了大人的监管,可能会犯错误。

sorry,以为是翻译。

Have you ever think about moving out from family, to have complete independence? Have you ever think about the problems you will face to if you live alone? Have you ever think about the effects for your study? Some students think they are already well prepared to live alone, they believe that is the best way to learn about real life. But I disagree with this. I think moving out from family will reduce your times on school works, and also without adults' supervision, we may do somethings wrong.

Have you ever thought of moving away from home, and have a total independence? Have you ever thought of the problems that you will encounter when you live alone? Have you thought of the consequences that it might bring you? Some students believe that they are already wel