UC知道英语文章1：good bye Sakura
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After i understanded this unlucky message,i felt the life may be brevity and i grieved for the brevity of your life.Although we never meet again,but your everything will be remembered by everybody and it is perfect.In another world,you will get a beautiful angel.i think if having meet in afterlife,we will be still a pair of friend.
Good bye,my friend Sakura.
我自己写的，请高手帮忙检查一下有没语法错误和用词不当，万分感谢！
After i understanded this unlucky message
这句话要用过去完成时，understand不好，after i got informed of the。。
Although we never meet again,要用将来时，we will never meet any more
your everything ，用的不地道
you will get a beautiful angel??? get？什么意思啊？become？
i think if having meet in afterlife,we will be still a pair of friend.
改成，if afterlife existed and we met，we would be still a pair of friends 虚拟语气
I felt that the life was brevity
you will get a beautiful angel把get 改成become会比较好点把
i think if having meet in afterlife,we will be still a pair of friend. 你这句话是主将从现应该写I think if we meet afterlife
unlucky message－－－－bad news。 message不能乱用。
but your everything will be remembered by everybody and it is perfect.－－－－－everything？最好用behavior。everybody最好用everone。 it is perfect.？你想表达什么意思？
l angel.i think if 之间怎么没有连词呢，最好加个and
if having meet in afterlife用虚拟语气比较好，if we met 。后面用would，
,we will be still a pair of friend。。。。。。w