哪位高人帮我修改英文简历

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Personal Information
Name: Liu Jin Date of Birth: 1988-02-15
Gender: male Native Place: Henan
Mobile No.:13581949060 Email: willowjing0215@126.com
Education School: Beijing University of Chemical Technology
Position wanted
To obtain a challenging position about process technique of mechanization technology, safety evaluation equipment procurement and product sales.
Education
2005--2009 in Beijing University of Chemical Technology
Major: Safety Engineering
Major Course: mechanical drawing, engineering mechanics, engineering materials, electrical and electronic technology, senior math, AutoCAD, etc.
Internship and part-time job experience

Personal Information
Name: Liu Jin Date of Birth: 1988-02-15
Gender: male Native Place: Henan
Mobile No.:13581949060 Email: willowjing0215@126.com

Objective
Positions related to operation technique of mechanization, safety evaluation, equipment procurement(??指的是?采购员的话应该是BUYER), and product sales.

Education
2005--2009 in Beijing University of Chemical Technology
Major: Safety Engineering
Major Courses: (首字母全部大写)mechanical drawing, engineering mechanics, engineering materials, electrical and electronic technology, Advanced Math, AutoCAD, etc.

Internship and part-time job experience

作为工科生你的英文算可以了 不过我懒得改了 — —

格式跟内容都很重要,这样一大片,眼睛都疼
你把简历发我邮箱吧,我帮你看看gxax@tom.com

怎么没有地址呢????