指教修改文法错误,或者更好的英译。

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/06/05 06:16:32
I started to study drawing since I was a kid. but i prefer to
cartoons and caricatures.when I enrolled at Central Academy of Fine Arts of China, and have been keeping cartoon creation .i've published some works in the domestic cartoon's magazines.Soon after, I have sharped illustrations constantly in various magazines and the books of children's fairy tales.
Dring the time of preparing for the study abroad, i was edited work by myself which have been serialized by several major portals which one has been concentrated to be a book at the present time(目前正在集结成书)

I first started drawing when I was a kid. I have been drawing pictures ever since. I like drawing cartoons and caricatures the best.

After I enrolled into the Central Academy of Fine Arts in China, I have been keeping records of my cartoon work products. I published some of my cartoon work in magazines. Soon after my publication, I was regularly invited to make illustrations for various magazines and children’s books of fairy tales.

我不理解你原文最后一句话的意思,所以没有修改

第一行study改成learn(study有研究的意思),第二行at改成in(enroll in),
第三行keeping后加up(keep up),published也要改成issued,你是发表作品,不是出版。the改成some(the表示定指,但我们看不出来你是定指什么,只需用some就行)
第四行sharped改成sharpened(这个我不是特别确定,不知道你这是什么意思)
第六行time改成course更好,edited改成editing
最后一个句子用两个定语从句不好,要改一下。