谁帮我检查下我的英文简历对不对？

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Name: Wang Qiliang
Sex: Male
Folk: Han
Height: 180cm
Health: Excellent
Birthday: March,1991
Political Status: League Member
Max. Degree: Technical secondary
Major: Car Decolaration
Post: Monitor
School Address: 24#MinzhuStreet,Qingshi Road, Beitang Region, Wuxi city,Jiangsu procince
Home Address: 16#Pizhou Road, Yunhe Region, Pizhou city, Jiangsu procince
Cell Phone: 15949221496
Resident: Pizhou, Jiangsu, China
Rewards Events:
1. <Computer Project> First Class 2007-2008 First team
2. <Electrical System Start-up Project> Second Class 2007-2008 First team
3. <Automobile Engine Project> Ten Class 2007-2008 Second team
4. “Excellent Secretary” of Students Union
5.“Campus Star” Recitation Contest
Intention:

Name: Qiliang Wang
Sex: Male
Folk: Han
Height: 180cm
Health: Excellent
Date of birth: Mar 1991
Political Status: Youth League Member
Education: Secondary School of Technical
Major: Car Decolaration
Postiton in School: Monitor of a class
School Address: #24 Minzhu Lane,Qingshi Road, Beitang District, Wuxi city,Jiangsu province
Home Address: #16 Pizhou Road, Yunhe District, Pizhou city, Jiangsu province
Cell Phone: 15949221496
Resident: Pizhou, Jiangsu, China
Rewards Events/Awards:
1. <Computer Project>: Level 1
Time: 2007-2008 First term
2. <Electrical System Start-up Project>: Level 2 Time: 2007-2008 First term
3. <Automobile Engine Project> Level 10: Time: 2007-2008 Second term
4. Price of Students Union's “Excellent Secretary”
5. Price of “Campus Star”for the School Recitation Contest

Objective: I am willing to get a job which is related to my