请看一看对不对，英语

来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/05/27 20:06:27
I have a brother.he is a sports fans. he wants to be a player.he usually plays with his friend.

fans -- fan
friend -- friends

he is a sports fans. (fans改成fan)
with his friend(friend改成friends)

fans 改为fan

friend改为friends

第一：应把fans改为fan,因为你哥哥只是一个运动迷 ，所以用单数。
第二：应把friend改为friends.因为和你哥哥平时玩耍的朋友不止一个。
加油喔！

你是不是想表达,我有一个弟弟,他很喜欢运动(运动迷),他想成为一个运动员,他常常和他的朋友一起运动.

我建议你这样写

I have a brother,he is a sports fan. He wants to be a athlete,he usually have sports with his friends.