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1.a favorite book or story you have read
In my opinion robinsion wanders records is the best i have read .The strong strand of personality is lousy to live for 28 years on the islang.Heovercame various ordinary peoples hard difficulty for overcome.Lubinxun is very brave.In this book,I had known comes across the matter not to have to be timid cerainly an go out the difficult position.
2.a person you are familar with /one of your best friend
My best friend is Linda.She has big eyes,long hair,sweet smile is often on her face.She is interested in many things.Not only he likes sports and music,but also she works very hard.We have the same dream,we wants to become a nurse.When Ifind her say that I an sad or happy,she always listen to me and she is very kind to me.I hope we can be best friends forever!
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第一篇：读过的最好看的一本书/故事。修改的地方用括号标出来了。
In my opinion（,） Robinson Wanders Records is the best（加个book，否则不通） i have (ever) read.The strong strand of personality is lousy to live for 28 years on the islang.He(空格)overcame various （difficulties）(that) ordinary people(去掉s) (find it) hard (difficulty for -> to) overcome. (Lubinxun->Robinson 你用拼音老外看不懂的) is very brave.(In ->Through) this book,I (had known-> came to know that,) (if you) come(去s) across (the->any) matter (,) (do) not (to) have to be timid(.) (最后句太多错误了我给你重新写了一次. You should confidently face difficult situations.

2.a person you are familar with /one of your best friend
My best friend is Linda.She has big eyes,long hair,sweet smile is often on her face.She is interested in many things.Not only he likes sports and music,but also she works very hard.We have the same dream,we wants to become a nurse.When Ifind her say that I an sad or happy,she always listen to me and she is