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作文如下：LIE is a negative word but sometime you should tell the lie to maintain the stable and good relationship with others that means telling the truth is not the most important consideration in the relationship.
In the relationship of friends,Trust must be the key among the friends.I don't make friens with who is alway not honest to me for their own sake.But to some extent cheating is not alway the bad thing.On the contrary it can bring benifit to friendship.The things happen to me proved that.I borrowed the bike from my good friend and unfortuntely I broke it up.When he came to me for giving it back I lied to him.Until fixed well I sent it back to him and then I treated him a big dinner.It seems noting happen between us and our friendship is getting better.
The same phenomenon appear in the relationship of fammily members.Our relatives often care about us when we are far away from home.Something unhappy or some bad things might be happen to us.At this time,in
In the relationship of friends,Trust must be the key among the friends.I don't make friens with who is alway not honest to me for their own sake.But to some extent cheating is not alway the bad thing.On the contrary it can bring benifit to friendship.The things happen to me proved that.I borrowed the bike from my good friend and unfortuntely I broke it up.When he came to me for giving it back I lied to him.Until fixed well I sent it back to him and then I treated him a big dinner.It seems noting happen between us and our friendship is getting better.
The same phenomenon appear in the relationship of fammily members.Our relatives often care about us when we are far away from home.Something unhappy or some bad things might be happen to us.At this time,in
LZ老是用alway..少了一个S啦..是always..
其他还有些错的拼写,拿WORD查一下错字吧..
The things happen to me proved that.I borrowed the bike from my good friend and unfortuntely I broke it up.
改成Things.....a bike...I broke it..
后面..When he came and asked for the bike...
I didn't send it back unitl I fixed it.
seems nothing happend.
family
be happening
First, telling them won't make things any better
Secondly it makes them worry about you.
这个部分你前面和结尾用的是我们,这两句话用的确实你们,会感觉有点奇怪..想办法改一下吧..最好是同一个人称..
最后一句话读起来也怪怪的
may be hard to keep it a secret
a man who tells the truth may easily let...
maybe he doesn't ..
if it happened, things cant get back..
it would hurt the person..
其实逻辑思维和例子都很好啊..只是一些语法的问题..和拼错的单词..
太深奥了，我不懂。