这一篇英语作文有无语病？

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This is my friend. Her name is Emily. She is 14 years old. She is an English and she is from London. She is a student. She is in Class 6, Grade 7. We are in same school but we aren't in the same class. She has hamburgers and chicken for lunch. She likes playing tennis and playing volleyball. Emily and I are good friends.
作文要求：根据下列信息，写一段话，不少于10个句子。
姓名：Emily
年龄：14
出生地：伦敦
职业：学生
班级：七年级六班
午餐食物：汉堡包、鸡肉
爱好：网球、排球

She is an English 去掉an

We are in same school 其中in same改成in the same

其他地方都对 只是你的简单句用的太多了 如果你是刚开始学习的话 那就没什么问题了 如果你已经学了一些时候了 这个就太简单了 可以开始尝试用复杂句了

She is English