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来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/05/30 06:59:11
Today, the energy crisis is becoming more and more serious.The crisis is due to industrial development, a sharp increase in global population growth and consumption.This terrible energy
crisis has brought us a lot of problm.
Supply and demand changes lead to changes in energy prices.Including oil ,water,electricity and
coal's price to increase.Especially the ascension of petroleum price caused huge negative influence within the scope of world .Not only let the management of many petroleum companies encounter severity loss, but also let those factories which need the petroleum to be a raw material be suffered impaction .Water, electricity and coal is people's produce of necessity in daily life ,particularly city residents who completely depend on running waterand electric appliances to live,say nothing of the residents in big city.And then,lower consumer confidence
,increased spending.
With those crisises,we must do something to keep ourselves al

a lot of problm--a lot of problems

lead to changes in energy prices--lead to the changes in...

in energy prices.Including oil ,water,electricity and
coal's price to increase.--in energy prices, including the price rises in oil, water, electricity and coal.

Especially the ascension of petroleum price caused huge negative influence within the scope of world .--In particular, the the ascension of petroleum price has caused huge negative influence within the scope of world .

Not only let the management of many petroleum companies encounter severity loss,--This not only lets the management of many petroleum companies encounter severe loss,

but also let those factories which need the petroleum to be a raw material be suffered impaction --but also lets those factories which need the petroleum as a raw material suffer impaction .

Water, electricity and coal is people's produce of necessity in daily life --Water