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悬赏分：100 - 离问题结束还有 7 天 19 小时
我所有的分都在这了! 希望有个人才解答我的问题..
我主要有这么几个问题：
1．不知道我现在这个作文是个什么水平 。
2．不知道我作文方面差在哪或者有什么大毛病。
3．还有有什么要注意的。
4．要想得高分怎么改进,或者说在哪方面改进，比如单词 词组 或者句式什么的。
先谢谢您的帮助， 哪些不足您尽管严厉点直说 ！谢谢！
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What Electives to Choose
In modern society today, every college has arranged all kinds of electives to meet students’ interests or needs, varying art to foreign languages.
On one hand, students choose different electives, according to their interests, in order to colourfy their rigid life. Additionally, they’ll make lots of friends, who have the interests and goal in common, which contributes to improve their communication skills. On the other hand, they choose some electives which not only broaden their vision, but also meet their needs in the future jobs, for instance you can choose foreign country history if you are learning a foreign language and choose children’s psychology if you are a medical student a
What Electives to Choose
In modern society today, every college has arranged all kinds of electives to meet students’ interests or needs, varying art to foreign languages.
On one hand, students choose different electives, according to their interests, in order to colourfy their rigid life. Additionally, they’ll make lots of friends, who have the interests and goal in common, which contributes to improve their communication skills. On the other hand, they choose some electives which not only broaden their vision, but also meet their needs in the future jobs, for instance you can choose foreign country history if you are learning a foreign language and choose children’s psychology if you are a medical student and so on.
As far as I am concerned , choosing some electives that are unknown and difficult for me is an opportunity to improve my quality and develop my potential. Only in this way can my college life be made into the fullest.
额，英语作文还没教