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They were going to marry ,so they came to the bank to drew some money.
But suddenly ,a couple of men wearing stocking masks broke into the bank.
Then the girl heard some sound of shouting ,crying and shooting.
…………
When the girl came round, she found herself in a hospital.
A man was sitting beside her bed. He looked old because of his gray hair and his aged face.
“Who is he?”the girl exert(运用) all her power to thought, “ I can’t remember anything! Maybe he is my father!”
“Dad ,what happened to me ?”
“Well……Nothing serious.You was only a little frightened.”the man answered her after a moment’s pause.
Afterwards, the girl came to life ,started a new career, and found a boyfriend.
One day ,she took her boyfriend to her home.
The boy told the man that he would take the girl as wife. The man’s facial expression was complex.
He led the boy to his ro
取钱drew --draw
sound 改为noise更好
at one push改为 in a hurry
It said that 改为 It's said that
coming---came
standed--stand，这里按照照片中的时态，不必用过去时，而且过去时也应该是stood
没错啊
“Who is he?”the girl exert(运用) all her power to thought,
是“to think”
动词不定式不用过去时
1在"They were going to marry "前加because，因为这是个原因状语从句
2drew__draw 原因；动词不定式to后+动词原形 ，这里的draw不但有“画画”的意思，还有“取钱”的意思。
3sound --sounds 原因；sound 是个可数名词，所以要用复数形式。
4thought--think 原因；动词不定式to后+动词原形
5 was --were 原因；you are 搭配 are 的过去式是were
6we--us 原因：we的宾格形式是us
7coming --came 原因；never加动词的原形 但这里是过去的事情 所以用过去式came
8standed--stood 原因；stand的过去式是stood
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maybe never coming back.
maybe never come back
偷懒别见怪哈，直接从原篇里改：
A girl ,who was(改为is,一般现在时表状态) beautiful and lovely,was in a bank with her boyfriend .
They were going to marry（改为get married，要用被动时态） ,so they came to the bank to drew（改为draw,不定时后面是动词原形） some money.