请大家帮我改一下稿子，高分悬赏

来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/06/03 03:29:51
Dear judges, teachers and friends. I’m Arthur from Class 5, Grade 9 in Bijie No.8 Middle School. Today, it’s my honor to be here with a beautiful dream. Now, I’ll tell you why I stand here to take part in this English competition.
I come from Bijie, which is a poor small town. And a lovely dream drove me here, that’s I want to tell you learning English is not just for mark, not just for going to a good university, not just for making money. It’s for building a bridge between you and me. As we know, China is developing very quickly, China is becoming more and more powerful, so that there are many people in other countries afraid of China and believing that China will be dangerous to their countries. Ladies and gentlemen, now we have responsibility to tell world that we are peace.
A lot of people think that we are more and more powerful and believe some day, China will go on an expedition to other countries. But I want to say, it’s impossible, it won’t happen. Since now, Ch

人家认不认为我们中国对他们构成威胁不是语言的原因，语言是用来沟通的，但沟通并不能解决这样的问题。请三思。。

哥们 ，看三楼
语言确实是沟通的重要途径，既然要阐明自己国家的观点，就要流畅些，人性化些，但是不知道在你发言的过程中，会有人打断你不，你应该做好准备啊~·111·

it's my honor 不怎么好，感觉比人低一等了 坚决不要用它 在外国不需要太谦

虚 不然人家认为好欺负或 虚伪

应该说自己很高兴，反正是用I做主语 比较好 显示你自己比较自信

NOW ，I TELL 显得比较生硬，如果替换的话，最好用，我想我应该让你们知道

我今天为什么站在这里的原因，呵呵。（自己翻译啊，你英语水平不错）

I come from Bijie, which is a poor small town 这里把which is 去掉，然

后找点优点给这个小地方。也就是后面加上but ....a poor but ...

And a lovely dream drove me here, that’s I want to tell you learning English 转折的太突然啊，应该找点什么和小镇联系，然后慢慢转过来，that’s I want to tell you learning English这里it's the following words .分一句，my english 比较口语话的我的英语（我所学的英语）加上下面的，不是为了什么。。。。
It’s for building a bridge between you and me 直接接着说just for ...

as we know 改成It is well-known that

afraid of China and believing 中改成believe 这句后面还要加上个盲目ideas后缀 blindly
Ladies and gentlemen, now we have responsibility