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With the developed health care of the world, the birth’s rate of babies increases sharply in the developing countries such as China, India and South America countries. It is thought to be responsible for the world’s population explosion, which bring out a lot of serious problem of our society.
It is harmful on two levels. At first place, population explosion is meant that more and more people share limited world’s resources such as foods, living places, and others daily consumption, which would lead to the shortage of world’s resources. Following, competition in the every aspect of our lives get hard than it ever before. For instance, it is easy to find a good job in the china in 2003for the people who have the bachelor degree. Nevertheless, situation completely different in 2008, people who have the mast degree will find that is difficult to get a job.
From my opinion of view, situation is not get worse as it thought to be. The public
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Population Explosion
With the developed health care of the world, the birth’s rate of babies increases sharply in the developing countries such as China, India and South America countries. It is thought to be responsible for the world’s population explosion, which bring out a lot of serious problem of our society.
It is harmful on two levels. At first place, population explosion is meant that more and more people share limited world’s resources such as foods, living places, and others daily consumption, which would lead to the shortage of world’s resources. Following, competition in the every aspect of our lives get hard than it ever before. For instance, it is easy to find a good job in the china in 2003for the people who have the bachelor degree. Nevertheless, situation completely different in 2008, people who have the mast degree will find that is difficult to get a job.
From my opinion of view, situation is not get worse as it thought