这两篇英文改错谁能帮忙

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I was only about six that he held his hand out to me.I took it in me and we walked.Then I ask him,"Grandpa,how come you have so much lines on your hand?" He laughed and said,"Well,that's a big question!'He was silent for a moment.So he answered slowly:"Each these lines stands for a trouble in my life."I looked at his other hands."But Grandpa,what do you have more lines on that one?""Because there are more the honors and joys in my life."
第二篇
When the world enters the 21st century,the development in the science and technology will bring us much more new hopes and chances we've never imgined before.People are hoping have a peaceful and highly developing world.To catch up with the new development and to be success in the new century the younger generation is required to have different kind of skills and abilities,such like the computer science and the English language.Otherwise one will be left behind.Young people should s

1. that 改成 when
2.ask 改成 asked
3.So 改成 Then
4.Each 后面加上of
5.hands改成 hand
6.what 改成 why
7.去掉more和honors之间的and

第二篇
1.enter 后面加 into
2.hoping 后面加 to
3.developing 改成developed
4.kind 改成 kinds
5.去掉face后面的with

第一天：I was only about six when he held his hand out to me.I took it and we walked.Then I asked him,"Grandpa,how come you have so much lines on your hand?" He laughed and said,"Well,that's a big question!'He was silent for a moment.Then he answered slowly:"Each of these lines stand for a trouble in my life."I looked at his other hand."But Grandpa,why do you have more lines on that one?""Because there are more honors and joys in my life."

第二篇

When the world enters the 21st century,the development in science and technology will bring us much more new hopes and chances that we've never imgined before.People are hoping to have a peaceful and