求教:6年级英语作文
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请给我的作文打分挑错,谢谢!
以"我的好朋友"为题,写一篇不少于5句话的短文
共5分
My good friend
Hello! My name is Nancy. I have so many friends. But mary is my best friend . she often play with me . We always take phone in touch with each other.
I like my good friend!
谢谢啦!有错的请帮我纠正!!
以"我的好朋友"为题,写一篇不少于5句话的短文
共5分
My good friend
Hello! My name is Nancy. I have so many friends. But mary is my best friend . she often play with me . We always take phone in touch with each other.
I like my good friend!
谢谢啦!有错的请帮我纠正!!
My good friend
Hello! My name is Nancy.I have so many friends.But I think Mary is my best friend.She always plays with me.We always take a phone.I like my good friends very much,and my friends like me very much!
My good friend
Hello! My name is Nancy. I have so many friends. But I think mary is best. she always plays with me . We always communicate through telephone,I like my good friend very much !
I have many friends
We always take a phone.