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From the given materials l learn that they are mainly discussing the reason why Anassazi vanished. The passage maintain that the cause should be a evere summer drought while the speaker oppose the idea.
The first reason stated by the passage was the coincide of the year, when the Anasazi disapeared and when the drought happened. The speaker thinks the discovered evidents implies that the drought were not that severe. The proofs including some trees which have grown there for long time, and which suggested the ample wather source of the place.
Another reason why the writer hold the oppinion was the discovering of irrigation system, such as dam and canals. Nevertheless, the speaker said, those kind of construction are not strong proof, because, The use of this are too prevailing. For e.g. people may use it just for cultivate lands or some other use.
The last reason made by the article was the guessing which the Chaco Canyon's people may suffered from a p
The first reason stated by the passage was the coincide of the year, when the Anasazi disapeared and when the drought happened. The speaker thinks the discovered evidents implies that the drought were not that severe. The proofs including some trees which have grown there for long time, and which suggested the ample wather source of the place.
Another reason why the writer hold the oppinion was the discovering of irrigation system, such as dam and canals. Nevertheless, the speaker said, those kind of construction are not strong proof, because, The use of this are too prevailing. For e.g. people may use it just for cultivate lands or some other use.
The last reason made by the article was the guessing which the Chaco Canyon's people may suffered from a p
我觉得文章的结构很清晰，答题很规范。
因为没看到材料不知道你具体写的对不对，但应该不会偏到哪去。
如果你对自己列出的三个理由都有信心的话我觉得这篇文章可以是满分的。