帮我翻译这句是否正确！

可以啊。
Besides,have you got any update on my social insurance?

besides，I want to learn wether my social insurance is ok？

说英语的人都不回很委婉的，你在直白他都能接受，文化差异

update 好象不怎么合适？
By the way, Do you have any new information for my social insurance?

要委婉的话，

so, by the way, do you happen to have any updates on my social insurance?

这样超级委婉了，呵呵

By the way, would you please offer something new on my social insurance