这样说(诅咒)有何不妥？

有不符合英语说法的地方吗？怎么改？
Hey，Beverly,still alive?Remember

me?M Jeremy.
Amazing to hear my voice?
As far as I could remember,you came

to this world and have been

teoubling this world since eighteen

years ago,didn't you?
I intended to send you a special birthday present.
Now what you hear is just the present:
———listen carefully———
I CUESE YOU!
I hope that you fail in the coming Nation College Entrance Examination!
Nobody marry you in your whole life!
Everything bad happen to you!
And…and…and so on………
Can you undertand my poor spoken English?
Bad luck!Bye～～
No...it's serious……………
`M`=`I'm`
p.s.谢谢`wiiiztyb`
这是我写的.
`爱`不需要理由 `恨`也不需要理由^_^
我会在她生日那天读给她听·
谢谢各位~

Hey，Beverly.
Still alive?Remember me?M Jeremy.
Amazed to hear my voice?
I have a special birthday present for you.
GO TO HELL！
LOSER！You are just a big loser for all your life!
You for sure will fail in the coming Nation College Entrance Examination!
You are so ugly and nasty. Nobody will marry you forever!
Go jump off the cliff! You stupid dumb ass!
See you NEVER~!!!

都是开玩笑的时候说的吧。

这个人英语还不错的。不知道他为什么那么恨另外那个人。

ahh . nobody marry you in ur whole life.
yup.thats a curse.
you r vicious.

Hey，Beverly,

Still alive?

Remember me?

Jeremy. （口语时相当于，I am Jeremy，或是，This is Jeremy。也可以说，Jeremy here！但是考虑这是诅咒口气，所以用简用法。说时要恶狠狠的说。）

Amazed to hear my voice?

（这一句统统不要：As far as I could remember,you came to this world and have been teoubling this world since eighteen years ago,didn't you?

I have a special birthday thing for you.

GO TO HELL!