UC知道麻烦大家帮我检查一下我自己写的英语文章，我基础有点差，谢谢
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内容如下：
"Family album USA"is a interest,outstanding litte movie. In the movie,Richarrd is a photographer.He is wirtting a book.It's an Amercian album. He has a very happy family.Robbie is his little brother.He is goes to high school.Every class has a bad apple.Actually,Robbie gives teacher a big headache. In the ACT 1,Richarrd is leave his bag on the ferry. Alexandra is a Greece girl. She bring it back to him. The Richarrd's family gives thanks for it. She deserves a pat on the back,she is a samrt lady and very nice.
"Family album USA"is a interest,outstanding litte movie. In the movie,Richarrd is a photographer.He is wirtting a book.It's an Amercian album. He has a very happy family.Robbie is his little brother.He is goes to high school.Every class has a bad apple.Actually,Robbie gives teacher a big headache. In the ACT 1,Richarrd is leave his bag on the ferry. Alexandra is a Greece girl. She bring it back to him. The Richarrd's family gives thanks for it. She deserves a pat on the back,she is a samrt lady and very nice.
"Family album USA" is (an) (interesting),outstanding litte movie.
interesting首字母是元音字母，所以要用"an"；"interest"是动词，在这里变为形容词就要改变词性interesting(有趣的);
In （this） movie, Richarrd is a photographer.
最好用this，因为上面已提到这部电影；
He is （writing） a book. It's an (American) album.
拼写错误；
He has a very happy family. Robbie is his little brother. He （goes） to high school.
要么"He is going to..."要么"He goes to...." 在这里用"goes"好一点；
Every class has a bad apple. Actually, Robbie gives teacher a big headache.
这句话没有错误，很好！^_^
In the ACT 1,Richarrd （left） his bag on the ferry.
这里用一般过去式比较好。left就是leave的过去式。
Alexandra is a Greece girl. She (brought) it back to him.
同样，这里也该用过去式。brought是bring的过去式。顺便说下，在英语中，不存在第三人称主语直接加动词原型这种情况的。
The Richarrd's family (gave) thanks for (her).
同上，用过去式"gave