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假如你是吉姆。请根据所给的提示，给你的笔友Peter写一封信，谈谈你的学习和生活情况。60个词左右。
你喜欢体育运动，经常在课后参加体育锻炼。每星期大约锻炼3-4次。你家离学校大约两公里，你每天骑自行车上学。你认为骑自行车上学也是一种锻炼。假期中你喜欢和朋友们骑自行车去乡下旅游。下个星期你计划去家乡度假，那里很美，人们也很友好。你打算在哪里呆上一个星期。
Dear Peter,
I like sports very much. I often take exercise after school. I exercise about three or four times a week. Do you like to exercise ?My home is about 2 kilometers from my school, so I go to school by bike every day. I think riding a bike is exercise, too. Ilike to ride the bike with my friends to the beautiful countryside during the vacation. I'm planning to go to my hometown for vcation.My hometown is friendly and the people are friendly there.I'm staying there for a week.
Please tell me something about yourself.
Yours,
Jim
你喜欢体育运动，经常在课后参加体育锻炼。每星期大约锻炼3-4次。你家离学校大约两公里，你每天骑自行车上学。你认为骑自行车上学也是一种锻炼。假期中你喜欢和朋友们骑自行车去乡下旅游。下个星期你计划去家乡度假，那里很美，人们也很友好。你打算在哪里呆上一个星期。
Dear Peter,
I like sports very much. I often take exercise after school. I exercise about three or four times a week. Do you like to exercise ?My home is about 2 kilometers from my school, so I go to school by bike every day. I think riding a bike is exercise, too. Ilike to ride the bike with my friends to the beautiful countryside during the vacation. I'm planning to go to my hometown for vcation.My hometown is friendly and the people are friendly there.I'm staying there for a week.
Please tell me something about yourself.
Yours,
Jim
I exercise about three or four times a week. Do you like to exercise ?
这里 exercise换成have/do exercise会更舒服些
I think riding a bike is exercise, too.
改称 I think riding a bike is also a kind of exercise, too. 更准确
Please tell me something about yourself. 这里用you就可以了没必要用yourself
写得还行，不过如果能多加些修饰或者漂亮的句子结构会更完美
比如家乡风景很美：The scene in my hometown is so wonderful that everyone who has seen it loves my hometown very much
这样文章就会丰富很多^^
呵呵，加油哦，祝你学业有成