帮我美化四句话。Thanksgiving!

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检查错误，特别介词是否符合习惯用法，结构再美化一下，谢谢！
中文是大致意思，不是逐词翻译的，仅供参考一下。

I am looking forward to pursue my postgraduate study under your supervision.
我期待成为您的研究生。

Thus I have embarked upon online application your university.
因此我已经开始了网上的申请。

Whatever the result will be, I would like to visit your department and then do an unpaid research internship in your laboratory next year.
无论结果如何，我都希望明年能够亲临您的实验室做无报酬的研究实习。

I hold it will be beneficial greatly to my further study.
我坚信这将非常有利于我未来的深造。

I am looking forward to pursuing my postgraduate study under your tutorial.
我期待成为您的研究生。

Thus, I have got down to the application online.
因此我已经开始了网上的申请。

However, I expect to do the unpaid research training in your laboratory next year.
无论结果如何，我都希望明年能够亲临您的实验室做无报酬的研究实习

I do believe that it will be favorable for my further study.
我坚信这将非常有利于我未来的深造。

我理解你希望写华丽的心情~但是首先是要看得自然舒服，不做作~~而且容易读懂~~~稀奇古怪的词组不一定有用~~所以我帮你修改得意思更加贴切一些，更加易懂。

1. I am looking forward to pursuing my postgraduate study under your supervision.
2. Thus I have started my online application process for your university.
3. Regardless of my application result, I would like to visit your department and volunteer in a research internship in your laboratory next year.
4. I believe it will greatly benifit my further study.