UC知道英文高手进,轻松拿分
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My mother is an accountant, who has influenced me deeply. When I was a middle school student, she always explained her work, such as diagrams and data. {More specifically, I saw the fluctuating numbers and flexuous curves compose the diagram which is a quarter profit of one product on the computer screen.} Since
then, I became interested in accounting and finance.
高手帮忙看下,老师说括号里的没有意义....
帮忙改下.......看看怎么样写才好.....满意追加
then, I became interested in accounting and finance.
高手帮忙看下,老师说括号里的没有意义....
帮忙改下.......看看怎么样写才好.....满意追加
I have been influenced deeply by my mother who is an accountant. My mother likes her job so much that she often explained her work to me, even when I was a middle school student. She showed me diagrams and data on the computer screen, and explained to me what are fluctuating numbers and flexuous curves, and how to judge profit of a product from a diagram. Gradually, I am more and more interested in accounting and finance.
你的英文作文水平很不错！
文章要集中在一个主题，即受母亲的影响，喜欢财经。老师说的对，括号内的部分对主题有所偏离，不如加以简化。另外，我加入了母亲热爱工作的说法，以使母亲不断向孩子解释的行为更为合理化。
仅供参考。
most impressive to me, she showed the fluctuating numbers and flexuous curves in the diagram represented the quarter profit of a product profit in the computer.
好的。