求英文高手指点!!!

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/06/26 03:46:14
“积极的态度、坚定的信念、迅速有效的执行、客户至上的原则以及对公司对事业的热爱是成功的关建”可否翻译成“The linchpin upon which success depends cause of the Positive attitude,
steadfast belief,expeditious execution,the principle of Customer Focus and devotion to the cause of the team and the business.

用了一堆华丽的词组..= =.....
我想说的是,英文不是中文,外国人是不会这么说话的
以下是我的翻译
What gives us success is our positive attitude, firm belief, fast and effective exeuction, customer oriented principle, and enthusiasm for work.

A positive attitude and strong convictions and the rapid and effective implementation of the principles of customer focus, as well as to the cause of the company's success is the love of the customs building
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