UC知道请帮忙给这篇英语作文改错
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Dear Lihua
With time going by.Although I don`t want to say goodbye,we have to say it now.You are a handsome and honest boy,furthermore,you are my best friend.
I always recall those beautiful days we spent together.I still remember two years ago I failed the exams for many times.I was so sad that I thought the dream about college was hopeless for me and felt depressed about my future.But you said "Failing in the exams can`t prove anything so we shouldn`t give up before the advent of the college entrance examination."Iwent onworking great effort to study after listening to your words. I think Imight have given up studying if you didn`t comfort me.
Drar friend,Iwill never forgett you,Ihope you live a happy life and all your dreams come ture.
请各位英语高手帮忙看看,似乎错误很多但是我不太会改,请找出错误并且改正,谢谢.比较急用.
With time going by.Although I don`t want to say goodbye,we have to say it now.You are a handsome and honest boy,furthermore,you are my best friend.
I always recall those beautiful days we spent together.I still remember two years ago I failed the exams for many times.I was so sad that I thought the dream about college was hopeless for me and felt depressed about my future.But you said "Failing in the exams can`t prove anything so we shouldn`t give up before the advent of the college entrance examination."Iwent onworking great effort to study after listening to your words. I think Imight have given up studying if you didn`t comfort me.
Drar friend,Iwill never forgett you,Ihope you live a happy life and all your dreams come ture.
请各位英语高手帮忙看看,似乎错误很多但是我不太会改,请找出错误并且改正,谢谢.比较急用.
1.Though i don't want to say goodbye, i have to.主谓一致
2. i still remembered (时态）
3. when i failed exams for many years, i was so sad that...
4. i was so sad that i thought i could not go to college and i felt depressed all the time.
5. I went on working hard after i listened to you.
1.称呼后要有逗号；
2.I will never forget you.I hope you will have a happy life and your dreams will become ture.
3.最后要有落款
其他的我也看不出来了