上海高考英语作文

以前英语作文评分依据是根据要点和语言准确度而定，但近几年要求“使用较多语法结构和词汇”，因此要想得高分，除了要点和语言准确度以外，还必须在较复杂的句子结构或较高级的词汇上有所表现。句式单一，缺乏生气的文章，哪怕无任何错误也不可能得高分，相反“有些错误，但是为了使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致”，给分档次仍在最高档(21～25分)。
一、以下四种手段是增加句子复杂性的常见方法，也是得高分的“亮点”。
1.改变句子的开头方式，不要一味地都是主语开头，接着是谓语、宾语，最后再加一个状语。可以把状语置于句首，或用分词做状语等。?
〔原文〕We met at the school gate and went there together early in the morning.?
〔修正〕Early in the morning we met at the school gate and went there together.?
〔原文〕The young man couldn?t help crying when he heard the bad news.?
〔修正〕Hearing the bad news， the young man couldn?t help crying.?
2.在整篇文章中，避免只使用一两个句式，要灵活运用诸如倒装句、强调句、主从复合句、分词状语等。
①强调句?
〔原文〕My parents praised Ah Fu warmly. It had saved my little sister bravely.?
〔修正〕My parents praised Ah Fu warmly. It was our brave Ah Fu who had saved my little sister bravely.?
②由what等引导的从句，此处的what相当于中文的“所……”，有很大的概括力，如:?
〔原文〕We had to stand there to catch the offender.?
〔修正〕What we had to do was