英文改错~~ 谢谢

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/06/10 10:28:19
With pretty phrases and empty promises, the advertisements are misleading their consumers. People attracted by these fantasy advertisement and pay for the unnecessary goods. Nevertheless, advertisement has good influence on society, such as the public service announcement. This essay will analysis the advertisement influences on society.

To begin with, some advertised goods are worth buying, whereas others’ discrimination in the advertisements are overstated, and take in some people. Advertisements provide direct and detailed information for customers to buy the fittest products. If a product on the billboard is the right one that a consumer need, this individual might go purchasing and have a try on it. Despite this, however, it can be argued that the increasing competition in the business world oblige some companies to opt for fake advertisements to gain more revenues than their competitors. Such marketing style deceives those naive consumers, and the companies will eventu

第一段:
第二行,people are attracted by these fantasy advertisements and they pay....
最后一句,this essay will analysis the influences of advertisement on society.

第二段:
第二行, and some people are taken in.

第三段;
第六行,these assistant加s
前面用的是one aspect,后面用 on the other hand,是不是要对应一下呢。

最后一段:
By this mean,

单纯语法的话我觉得差不多了。不过从有些句子意思上有点讲不通哦。
你像最后那句:从这个意义上讲,消费者就能够欣赏吸引眼球的广告了。
本来顾客就可以随便欣赏广告啊,是吧。可以说,消费者就可以更自在地欣赏...
By this mean, the comsumers will enjoy the eye-catching ads more easely.

这是我的建议啦。。