英语短文-how to choose hotel

if i need a place to stay over the night while i'm traveling, i have many standards for choosing a hotel.the most important question is money .if i have enough money,i'll get the hotel which is near by the beautiful scenery so i can enjoy them and at the same time ,it must have a conventient traffic .so i can easily arrive at where i want to go.then the room i take a rest must have a bathroom ,so after a whole day's traveling,i can haven a comfortable bath to ralax my tired body.in addition ,i need a television.if it comes to the season of winter or summer,i'd like an air-condition in the room.

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