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每代人在重要的方面都不同， 你这一辈和你父辈的不同是什么？
Forced by people generation by generation, the society has been caught up in a storm of change, result in the increasing gap and differences between two generations. Specifically, differences between me and my parents' generation, which strongly impact the lives, involve many important ways. And some major aspects are listed followed.
Initially, my parents' attitude towards future career is differentiated from mine, which is a general view in young people. Traditionally, young adults are preoccupied with business, government officer and the like—occupations which guarantee financial success, certain accumulation of procession and comfortable maybe luxury lives. And this is exactly what the blueprint of future career in the generation of my parents. Nonetheless, now the pendulum seems to swing to the other way. Based on the majority of views in future career on the youth around me and a census in 2000, many flesh blood have entered the m
Forced by people generation by generation, the society has been caught up in a storm of change, result in the increasing gap and differences between two generations. Specifically, differences between me and my parents' generation, which strongly impact the lives, involve many important ways. And some major aspects are listed followed.
Initially, my parents' attitude towards future career is differentiated from mine, which is a general view in young people. Traditionally, young adults are preoccupied with business, government officer and the like—occupations which guarantee financial success, certain accumulation of procession and comfortable maybe luxury lives. And this is exactly what the blueprint of future career in the generation of my parents. Nonetheless, now the pendulum seems to swing to the other way. Based on the majority of views in future career on the youth around me and a census in 2000, many flesh blood have entered the m
我建议：只把你和你的父母的不同点进行比较就可以了，不用说成：parents' generation，感觉me and my parents' generation前后两者不对称；可以说成是：the young and the old;
后面的举例很不错，写得很好，鼓励一下！
4.8分吧。。
内容很好啊，但是怎么全是语法错误...
4分吧
4.5分
语法有问题，但已经很好了。
能写这么长不容易啊~~~~~~