UC知道谁来帮忙改下语法错误？
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Last summer, I worked in a company that sells computer accessories. This was the first time for me to work in a real company. During this time, I learned some knowledge about computer and the use of different computer accessories. I also learned how to work with other people, which is more important than knowledge. After that, I have been interested at electric engeneering and finally decided to learn it at university..
我的ps中的一段，谁有好的建议也可写一下
我的ps中的一段，谁有好的建议也可写一下
interested at --interested in
总的来讲非常好了。
Last summer, I worked in a company which sells computer accessories. That was the first time for me to work in a real company. During that time, I learned some knowledge about computer and the usage of different computer accessories. I also learned how to work with other people, which is more important than any knowledge. After that, I have been interested in electronic engeneering, and finally I decided to learn it at university. (I chose it as my major at university.)