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Nowadays more and more people are concerning themselves with the issue about the earth. However, many people even do not know they are consuming at a rate the earth cannot afford. Actually, people should learn what they can do to treat more lightly on the earth. After taking the quiz, I have learned a lot about my ecological footprint, and was surprised by my own footprint. Because I frequently take the subway and bus, use many appliances at the same time, services have become the largest component of my ecological footprint. Therefore, I need to discover some practical ways to reduce the number. For example, by getting off the subway or bus one stop away from my destination, I could save some gas; by avoid using multiple media, I can save a lot of energy; in order to save more energy, I will switch to use solar energy appliances.

Nowadays more and more people are becoming concerned about the earth but many still do not realise we are consuming at a rate that the earth cannot cope with. We should learn about things we can do to treat the earth more gently. After taking the quiz, I have learned a lot about my ecological footprint on earth, and was surprised by this result. Because I frequently take the subway and bus, use many appliances at the same time, services have become the largest component of my ecological footprint. Therefore, I need to discover some practical ways to reduce the number. For example, by getting off the subway or bus one stop away from my destination, I could save some gas; by avoiding the use of multiple media, I can save a lot of energy; in order to save more energy, I will switch to use solar energy appliances.

中体来说写的很好，我的修改让整体感觉更通。可是想问问提早下地铁、公车为什么会省油？他们不照样要开嘛？这是个人看法。

After taking the quiz, I ave learned a lot about my ecological footprint, and I was surprised by my