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When he grows up,he is going to do what he wants to do.He is going to move somewhere interesting.Paris sounds like city that he could enjoy.There are lots of art exhibitions there.He wants to be an artist.So how is he going to do it?First,he is going to find a part-timeiob for a year or two and saves some money.Then he is going to be a student at an art school in Paris.And he is going to study French at the same time.Next,he is going to hold art exhibitions because he wants to be rich and buy a big house for his parents.He also wants to travel all over the world.One day,he is going to retire somewhere quiet and beautiful.

When she grows up, she's going to do what she wants to do. She's going to move somewhere interesting.Paris sounds like city that she
could enjoy. There are lots of art exhibitions there. She wants to be an artist.So how is she going to do it? First, she's going to find a part-time job for a year or two and save some money. Then she's goin