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Recently,I luckily got the admission tickets of " 2008 Shanghai Aerospace Techology Exhibition".So I have the chance to close encounter with the shenzhou -7 spacecraft.
In a spherical exhibition hall on the 1st floor,the most attractive objects are the three component parts of shenzhou-7 spacecraft：orbital module，re-entry moduleand propelling module。The spacecraft blasted off to the space carried by the Long-March II-F carrier rocket，propelling module provide the spaceship with power and fuel.Orbital module is the place where astronauts lived and did researches,it takes on the responsible of keeping on orbital motion after separeting from re-entry module. When the spacecraft prepared for returning back to Earth’s atmosphere,it gave up orbital module,and finally landed safely by re-entry module.
This exhibition showed not only the secret of shenzhou-7 spaceflight but also the contribution of aerospace technology giving us. A huge pumpkin,more than 200 ca

Recently,I have luckily got the admission tickets of " 2008 Shanghai Aerospace Techology Exhibition"".So I had the chance to close with the shenzhou -7 spacecraft.In a spherical exhibition hall on the 1st floor,the most attractive objects are the three component parts of shenzhou-7 spacecraft：orbital module，re-entry moduleand propelling module。The spacecraft blasted off to the space carried by the Long-March II-F carrier rocketp.Propelling module provided the spaceship with power and fuel.Orbital module was the place where astronauts lived and did researches,it took on the responsiblity of keeping on orbital motion after separeting from re-entry module. When the spacecraft prepared for returning to Earth’s atmosphere,it gave up orbital module,and finally landed safely by re-entry module.
This exhibition showed not only the secret of shenzhou-7 spaceflight but also the contribution of aerospace technology . A huge pumpkin,more than 200 catty,also displayed in thi