英语找毛病！（急）

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Hello everyone , My name is WANG Hongchao,I am 22 years old, I was born in a small village of Ji Lin Province,
I am so glad to participate in this interview, my specialty is a computer, better ability to operate the computer, my English does not calculate is too good, but I ever have not given up studying!I am always ready to offer my help and good at communication with others. My biggest merit is can the absolute obedience higher leader’s leadership,I choose to come here because I do think that company would provide me a more challenge work and better develope chance,I believe that my continued efforts will be quckly integrated into the company and it will be a good staff,thank you!
上面那些地方有毛病？英语高手帮我改下 ，谢谢了
这个是个求职介绍！

第一段无问题。

第二段感觉有些地方不好，鄙人厚颜给你改下。

I am so golad to attend this interview , im majored in computer,i've strong ability of computer operating .my english is not good enough ,but i never give up studying! I am always get ready to help others and good at commuication.My strongpoint is absolutely obey the leader's instructions, i choose to com here cause i do think that company would provide me a challenging job as well as a developing chance.I do believe through my continuous efforts i will blend into our big family (company 也行 family更亲切：）） and i will be a good staff.Many thanks.

你把你要表达的用华语
我帮你翻译好了
你写的很不好

机器翻译的吧：
my English does not calculate is too good
我的英语不算太好。
很好很强大

Thank you so much for giving me such a chance to take this interview!
My name is WANG Hongchao,I am 22 years old, I was born in a small village of Ji Lin Province, my major is computer, and I am good at computer(任何一项,编程,网站等,凸出你的强项和技能,这点至关重要,这也是