UC知道哪位高手帮忙考下我的雅思作文？
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the rapid development of modern science and techology in which we are living ,there are
existed a great controversy with reference to this issue in 21st century .The diversy of diference among products has two properties makes it hard for people abtain one complete agreement upon this topic .In my opinion the following aspects of discussing may be of help to deepen our understanding of cars .
As is kwon to the pulic ,nothing in the world is as perfect as wo hope ,which is the same of this case .detailly speaking ,it will lead to some unforgivable problems to our life .for example ,more and more people like to buy cars and the all uses the oil .Then ,it will go against pollution of environment ,reduce energy of nature,and baffle to the nation's economy development .Meawhile ,it will bring more and more issue in future .l think gaverment should takes more measures to reduce pollution issue of being consuming oil.
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existed a great controversy with reference to this issue in 21st century .The diversy of diference among products has two properties makes it hard for people abtain one complete agreement upon this topic .In my opinion the following aspects of discussing may be of help to deepen our understanding of cars .
As is kwon to the pulic ,nothing in the world is as perfect as wo hope ,which is the same of this case .detailly speaking ,it will lead to some unforgivable problems to our life .for example ,more and more people like to buy cars and the all uses the oil .Then ,it will go against pollution of environment ,reduce energy of nature,and baffle to the nation's economy development .Meawhile ,it will bring more and more issue in future .l think gaverment should takes more measures to reduce pollution issue of being consuming oil.
Despite its existing two properties ,if g
如果细节不注意，是不可能得到高分的。你的这篇文章，大致一看，就有很多错误，如：
1.该大写的字母没有大写。
2.拼写错误，如kwon，wo hope等。
3.标点符号前面不应该空格，而应该在后面空格。
4.单复数用的不对，如this problems
希望你仔细检查，至少自己认为没有错误了，再拿上来请大家帮助。考试的时候也一样。你自己认为没有错误时，其实仍然有错误，但错误可能会少一些。把英语写正确，让别人找不出错，实际上是一件很难做到的事。在句型、用词方面避免错误就更难了。
祝你进步！