高手过目,改下我的作文。改得好我出高分。

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/05/26 07:21:11
这是08年考研作文,小弟写的想请高手改一下,助小弟09考研成功。
Two disable young men are striding forward their new journey on the ground. Tools left behind and legs bound together, they are supporting each other with their firm hands. The caption reads: “you have merely one leg and so I am, helping each other, we can travel around. The illustrations here remain remarkably interesting as well as thought-provoking.
Far from a singular case, the picture presented here is symbolic of the significance that only when we got to know the benefits of cooperation, can we learn each other’s strength and make progress together. The competitions in nowadays, as any reasonable mind, turn to more and more fierce. We must defeat our rivals through powerful teamwork. Take Yao Ming for an example, he can achieve such enviable success, not only cause of his own diligence, but also because of his teammates’ hard work. Likewise, the successful launching of Shenzhou-7 spacecraft should attribute to scientists’ joint e

Two disable young men are striding forward their new journey on the ground. Tools left behind and legs bound together,and then, they are supporting each other with their firm hands. The caption reads: “you have merely one leg and so I am, helping each other, we can travel around.” The illustrations here remain remarkably interesting as well as thought-provoking.
Far from a singular case, the picture presented here is symbolic of the significance that only when we got to know the benefits of cooperation, can we learn each other’s strength and make progress together. The competitions in nowadays, as any reasonable mind, turn to more and more fierce. We must defeat our rivals through powerful teamwork. Take Yao Ming for an example, he can achieve such enviable success, not only cause of his own diligence, but also because of his teammates’ hard work. Likewise, the successful launching of Shenzhou-7 spacecraft should attribute to scientists’ joint of efforts instead of individual