UC知道四级 作文 刚写的 请高手们给点评一下 谢谢！！
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是一篇有关 “学生给老师打分” 的作文 谢谢！！
Students` Rating Their Teachers
A common phenomenon on our campus is that the students grade their teachers. Once an un-heard event ,it has now become a common occurrence, The importance of the score is increasing and the leaders of campuses are becoming more and more concerned about it .
The students should have the rights to grade as some people argue, the students and teachers should grade eachother. Also,one has to admit that only through in this way, can the teachers achievements be judgied fairly. However, it can`t be denied that it also has many disadbantages.For instance, some students may do not like,even hate their teachers` scrictness, the score they grade may very low, consequently, it is not the truth , as many other insist.
It is a dilemma and no one can put forward a perfect way to solve it . In my eyes, students grade their teachers has more advantages than disadvantages. Therefo
Students` Rating Their Teachers
A common phenomenon on our campus is that the students grade their teachers. Once an un-heard event ,it has now become a common occurrence, The importance of the score is increasing and the leaders of campuses are becoming more and more concerned about it .
The students should have the rights to grade as some people argue, the students and teachers should grade eachother. Also,one has to admit that only through in this way, can the teachers achievements be judgied fairly. However, it can`t be denied that it also has many disadbantages.For instance, some students may do not like,even hate their teachers` scrictness, the score they grade may very low, consequently, it is not the truth , as many other insist.
It is a dilemma and no one can put forward a perfect way to solve it . In my eyes, students grade their teachers has more advantages than disadvantages. Therefo
some comments:
1,there are some spelling errors in your written.
2,I feel that your idea is pretty well.
3,you can get a nice score
just my points....
不错，但是你作为四年级的学生，这个作文有点。。。。。。。。你的同学也许看不懂吧！
本人初一！#83