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人们对学生网上交友持不同意见。请你用英语写一篇关于学生网上交友的短文，介绍人们的不同观点，并表达自己的看法。
要求：字数不少于60。
赞成的理由：
1 广交朋友
2 可自由表达思想
3 利用外语学习
反对的理由
1 浪费时间
2 影响学习
3 可能上当受骗
你的看法……

With the development of the science, more and more people make friends on the Internet.
A lot of people think it very good. They can make more friends on the Internet and Internet is so free that people can talk about their opinions. People also can study with English on the Internet.
But some people think that it’s bad to make friends on the Internet, because it well take us much time and make our study bad. If you friends on the Internet, you may be cheated.
In my opinion, it’s good to make friends on the Internet, but it also has some disadvantages.

With the development of the science, more and more people make friends on the Internet.
A lot of people think it very good. They can make more friends on the Internet and Internet is so free that people can talk about their opinions. People also can study with English on the Internet.
But some people think that it’s bad to make friends on the Internet, because it well take us much time and make our study bad. If you friends on the Internet, you may be cheated.
In my opinion, it’s good to make friends on the Internet, but it also has some disadvantages.

还可以

With the development of the science technology , more and more people make friends through the Internet.
A lot of people think it's very good. They can make more friends on the Internet and Internet is so free that people can talk about their opinions. People also can study with English on the Internet.
But some people think that it’s bad to make friends on the Internet, because i