跪求英语高手！！！急急急啊！！！

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本人写了一篇英语作文，结果是被老师批了一顿，要求如下;
you have been asked to write to Mr.James ,a native English speaker, inviting him to give a talk to a club or organisation that you are involved in. You should explain the aims and interests of your club/organisation, and why you would like this person to give a talk.Suggest a time, a place, and a possible topic area for the presentation.Use your imagination to fill in any relevant details not given.

恳请高手出马，能写一篇范文来看看~~~或者提供相关的文章也可以，再次谢谢了！！！
是老师的要求来的

这是自己写的哦。

Mr. James is a police officer, and I am the homeroom teacher of a class of sixth grade students in the elementary school. An elementary school would be considered an academic organization.

Dear Mr. James,
My name is Sarah Miller, the homeroom teacher of a sixth grade class in Ruby Drive Elementary School. I'm writing this request letter in wish of having you come over to give my students a speech on the importance of having the basic knowledge of protecting themselves from bullies. There has been some serious problems concerning bullies in our school for a very long time now. It would be very encouraging if you would be so kind to make time to educate these youngsters of some useful techniques. Besides protecting oneself from bullies, I'm hoping that you would also be able to give them a short summary of a police officer's job. I'm sure the kids would be very thrilled to have a real police officer coming to their classroo