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Into the Museum of World Religions, on the wall to see worship followers patterns, heart and a sense of warmth touched, just as personal experience, though not their own religious beliefs, but they can feel the faith of Christians for the main, in good faith The belief, worship through the corridors, then showing a film about the birth and death to include the religious story of the origin of the universe's origin, said the explosion was not until human beings how to find self-belief in the hearts of the spirit of the whole scene as the mother of Warm room for people to have a better source of inspiration.
After watching the film, went to explore the museum to see is that the religious artifacts and clothing are all about giving people the largest religious spiritual support, but also for religious people to see the enthusiasm on both sides of the religious story screening room and meditation room , The story went into the screening room was to see many of the countries to

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