Keep in mind not only you are a worker,but also you are a father.这句话有错吗？

有错，这样写这句句子就没有主语了，应该用从句形式：
Keep in mind that you are not only a worker，but also a father.

Keep in mind that you are not only a worker but also a father

有错
not only you are a worker,not only 提到主语前面了,没理由用倒装句式

应该是
Keep in mind you are not only a worker, and you are a father.
后面用but also勉强可以,用and最好,记住你不仅是一个工人,而且也是一位父亲.

Keep in mind that you are not only a worker，but also a father.