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For another,the boom of many works and relevant policies provided citizens with more opportunities to make a trip.请问，我要表达的意思是，另一方面，行业的繁荣和相关的政策提供给市民更多的机会除外旅行。请问我这样写有问题吗？谢谢。
the boom of many works 容易被误解为 “烟花的爆鸣声”
make a trip 建议改为 go out for a trip
On the other hand, the booming of various businesses and relevent policies provides citizens with more opportunities to go for a trip.
其他我不清楚 另一方面应该用 on the other hand