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1、一次性塑料袋曾广为使用
2、由此带来的问题
3、限制使用一次性塑料袋的意义
Limiting the use of Disposable Plastic Bags
In the era of imformation and technology,there are more and more plastic bags used in our lives.Some people think they are cheaper and conivence.Some of those plastic bags used in go shopping ,while most of them are used buy food.
However,other people hold that so many kinds of plastic bags have a bad effect on our lives.First of all, they may pollution our enivernment. Second of all,they are damage on our health.Meanwhile,it’s bad for our.
As far as I’m concerned,we should limilting the use of plactic bags certain limit that we can keep a proper way between plastic bags and our enviornment and our health.
或者有没有什么网站，能测作文分的！！
谢谢大家的帮助！！
满分，按15分算！！
2、由此带来的问题
3、限制使用一次性塑料袋的意义
Limiting the use of Disposable Plastic Bags
In the era of imformation and technology,there are more and more plastic bags used in our lives.Some people think they are cheaper and conivence.Some of those plastic bags used in go shopping ,while most of them are used buy food.
However,other people hold that so many kinds of plastic bags have a bad effect on our lives.First of all, they may pollution our enivernment. Second of all,they are damage on our health.Meanwhile,it’s bad for our.
As far as I’m concerned,we should limilting the use of plactic bags certain limit that we can keep a proper way between plastic bags and our enviornment and our health.
或者有没有什么网站，能测作文分的！！
谢谢大家的帮助！！
满分，按15分算！！
最多7分吧
字数不够120，段落分的不好
主题不明确
没有很出彩的单词和词组，或语法
但是没有什么大毛病
所以，7分吧
最主要是单词量不满120
很关键
9到13分，还行
13-14分可以